Well done, Shannon - just a small presentation observation: you tend to push your images very close to the edge of your canvases, which can give things a bit of 'cramped', uncomfy look on the page: can I suggest you decide on a border/boundary between your artwork and the outside edge of the 'paper' - and the stick to that ratio throughout , so think about the proportion of negative space around your images - if you decide on a system for all your design pages, then it will have an organising effect on your Art Of pages : your model sheets etc will just look consistent and more purposeful. Does that make sense? For these sheets, for example, it feels as if you need to put as much space top and bottom as you've given left and right - do that, and I think your presentation will dial up nicely.
Well done, Shannon - just a small presentation observation: you tend to push your images very close to the edge of your canvases, which can give things a bit of 'cramped', uncomfy look on the page: can I suggest you decide on a border/boundary between your artwork and the outside edge of the 'paper' - and the stick to that ratio throughout , so think about the proportion of negative space around your images - if you decide on a system for all your design pages, then it will have an organising effect on your Art Of pages : your model sheets etc will just look consistent and more purposeful. Does that make sense? For these sheets, for example, it feels as if you need to put as much space top and bottom as you've given left and right - do that, and I think your presentation will dial up nicely.
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