Hey Shannon - okay, so I think - if you've got the time and energy - there are two things you might want to consider (but don't freak out because you've accomplished a lot in this final render!). 1) Compositionally, it feels like the left side of the image with the horizon line could be broken up - perhaps with a smaller duplicate building(s) to suggest there is 'more' city further away: one way to do this might be to use an alternate render of your existing buildings and use that image as part of the matte painting? It just feels as if our eye is being invited to go beyond the horizon, but we're not being shown a good reason why... 2) Is it possible to re-frame your composition so the top of the main building isn't being cropped by the frame (if your building has a top?) - it just seems odd that we're not being shown everything?
Note: do not get yourself into a tizz! If you can effect these changes calmly and with curiosity, then go for it... if you can't, worry not!
Hey Shannon - okay, so I think - if you've got the time and energy - there are two things you might want to consider (but don't freak out because you've accomplished a lot in this final render!). 1) Compositionally, it feels like the left side of the image with the horizon line could be broken up - perhaps with a smaller duplicate building(s) to suggest there is 'more' city further away: one way to do this might be to use an alternate render of your existing buildings and use that image as part of the matte painting? It just feels as if our eye is being invited to go beyond the horizon, but we're not being shown a good reason why... 2) Is it possible to re-frame your composition so the top of the main building isn't being cropped by the frame (if your building has a top?) - it just seems odd that we're not being shown everything?
ReplyDeleteNote: do not get yourself into a tizz! If you can effect these changes calmly and with curiosity, then go for it... if you can't, worry not!