What If? Metropolis': The City of Formen- Final Digital Set

The City of Formen: Final Render

Final Render Without Matte Painting

Matte Painting

GIF of Matte Painting
This is my final render, along with the matte painting (including GIF). 

Comments

  1. Hey Shannon - okay, so I think - if you've got the time and energy - there are two things you might want to consider (but don't freak out because you've accomplished a lot in this final render!). 1) Compositionally, it feels like the left side of the image with the horizon line could be broken up - perhaps with a smaller duplicate building(s) to suggest there is 'more' city further away: one way to do this might be to use an alternate render of your existing buildings and use that image as part of the matte painting? It just feels as if our eye is being invited to go beyond the horizon, but we're not being shown a good reason why... 2) Is it possible to re-frame your composition so the top of the main building isn't being cropped by the frame (if your building has a top?) - it just seems odd that we're not being shown everything?

    Note: do not get yourself into a tizz! If you can effect these changes calmly and with curiosity, then go for it... if you can't, worry not!

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