Yr 1: Contexts Written Assignment Online Essay Draft


This is my first draft of my Yr 1: Contexts Written Assignment, Please give it a read and let me know what you think should be added or taken away or if the formatting of the document should be changed. It's 1056 words excluding Harvard Illustration list and bibliography, but including the title question.

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  1. Good - this is a much more comfortable, focused use of your word count wouldn't you say? A small nit pick - just ensure your film title appears in italics, likewise your book titles etc. Also - you don't have to give the (1946) release date after the first time you do. Just give everything another proof-read too to catch any small remaining snags (there are a still a few in there). Reading the essay out loud to yourself is a sure-fire way of finding them...

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