From Script To Screen: 'Constant' Script - First Draft


This is my first time witting any form of script, so hopefully the formatting matches up. Please let me know if theres any adjustments I should make :)

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  1. Looking good to me, Shannon - one small point: I don't think you need the idea of the 'Telescopium Constellation' - because you've used the telescope already very well in your story, so maybe go for a real constellation from one of these lists - and maybe there's something in there that fits the themes of your story too:

    https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Former_constellations
    https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/IAU_designated_constellations

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