Fantastic Voyage: Evolution - Screenplay First Draft
This is my first draft of my script for Evolution, please let me know if there should be any changes to the dialogue , characters, the action, anything :)
Hey Shannon - congrats on getting this first script out... I enjoyed it.. I think you've nailed the tone nicely and I like all the interactions etc. It's very ambitious in terms of numbers of characters and animation, but the 'Russian doll' does ensure certain limitations which you can use to your advantage. One thing I thought about while reading it was the number of times you have 'arm-less' characters hanging onto things or otherwise interacting with stuff - as your Russian dolls don't have arms or legs, I was wondering what your strategy might be for these shots?
I was thinking for example when one of the small Russian dolls pull down on the scroll and the bigger Russian doll hold on they may open a little and try to clamp onto the smaller one.
Hey Shannon - congrats on getting this first script out... I enjoyed it.. I think you've nailed the tone nicely and I like all the interactions etc. It's very ambitious in terms of numbers of characters and animation, but the 'Russian doll' does ensure certain limitations which you can use to your advantage. One thing I thought about while reading it was the number of times you have 'arm-less' characters hanging onto things or otherwise interacting with stuff - as your Russian dolls don't have arms or legs, I was wondering what your strategy might be for these shots?
ReplyDeleteI was thinking for example when one of the small Russian dolls pull down on the scroll and the bigger Russian doll hold on they may open a little and try to clamp onto the smaller one.
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